A poem

[jaybreak]

Something I wrote in my journal the other day. Seems like it would fit here in this subforum.

May the waters spill as they glorify You.
May the stones crack and crumble as they praise You.
May the skies rend like threadbare garments as they honor You.
May the galaxies spin and spend their flames as they bow down to You.
May the cosmos return to the impenetrable chaos of the dark depths at the sound of Your command.

[forrealone]

Wow! Beautiful....

[Ed Hurst]

Excellent. A very nice blend of Hebrew sentiment in modern English language. It's definitely worth sharing.

[jaybreak]

Thank you both. Is there anything you would change about this? I'm just curious. This will go up on my personal blog.

[Ed Hurst]

No, but I would suggest you shouldn't ask that question. I think you know why, Brother.

[forrealone]

I agree with Ed.......

[jaybreak]

I suppose the question is an ingrained reflex, since I write for my day job and outside of that.

[Ed Hurst]

No doubt; I'm sure that would affect me, too. This is something on which we should be bold. Let the chips fall where they may.

[Robust1]

It's good just the way it's posted.