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Strange Syrup
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Thanks, Ed and Iain. The modern approach, for fiction at least, is either shorter sentences or, if you're going to write long sentences, pepper shorter ones in between them. I find the latter approach easier for me to do. Short sentences all the time start to sound like babytalk to me.
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Strange Syrup - by IainH - 05-15-2020, 02:05 AM
RE: Strange Syrup - by Ed Hurst - 05-15-2020, 05:14 AM
RE: Strange Syrup - by IainH - 05-18-2020, 03:35 AM
RE: Strange Syrup - by Ed Hurst - 05-19-2020, 06:07 PM
RE: Strange Syrup - by IainH - 05-20-2020, 03:22 AM
RE: Strange Syrup - by jaybreak - 05-23-2020, 07:26 PM
RE: Strange Syrup - by IainH - 05-28-2020, 03:10 PM
RE: Strange Syrup - by Ed Hurst - 05-20-2020, 05:10 AM
RE: Strange Syrup - by Ed Hurst - 05-29-2020, 08:22 AM
RE: Strange Syrup - by jaybreak - 05-29-2020, 08:53 AM

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